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How to Write Realistic Dialogue with non-native English Speakers

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information.

When Meredith Rankin reached out to me with an article about how to write dialogue with those who are still learning how to speak English, I was over the moon. While I am surrounded by those whose first language wasn't English (my own husband being one of them), it never occured to me how to treat this in the written form. But Meredith has some solid advice for writers.

Over to you, Meredith.

How to Write Realistic Dialogue between English Speakers and English-language Learners

Fiction often treats second language fluency as an all or nothing issue. Either the characters are completely fluent in the second language, or they’re completely ignorant of the language. That’s unrealistic. In my latest manuscript, I tried to convey the complexities of language learning.

Realistically, becoming totally fluent in another language takes years for most adults. Everyone learns at different speeds and the learning process is affected by myriad factors, including some outside the learner’s control. When I volunteer-taught English as a foreign language (EFL), I had students who were homebound because they had poor health or caring for loved ones; I had other students who were immersed daily in the language. Their progression differed accordingly.

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7 Simple Ways to Reinvigorate Your Creative Spirit (Guest Blog from Marcus Lansky)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information.

Today's post is written by Marcus Lansky. Marcus is what he calls an abilitator, working with people with differing abilities to start their own businesses. Writers, as much as they might hate the idea, are small business owners, particularly if they are selling their books and earning money from their writing (even if it is a small amount of writing). Marcus reached out to us with some ideas on how to get the creative juices flowing.

Ignite Your Creativity: Simple Ways to Reinvigorate Your Creative Spirit

Rediscover the spark that fuels your imagination and innovation. Creativity is a crucial asset in both your personal and professional life, but it's common to hit a wall where ideas cease to flow as freely as they once did. Facing creative burnout can feel like standing at a crossroads without a sign. This article explores seven actionable strategies to rejuvenate your creative energies and help you thrive once more.

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5 Key Tips to Writing a Stellar Fight Scene (Guest Blog)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information.

Today's post is written by A.E. Williams, a fellow editor and writer.

5 Key Tips to Writing a Stellar Fight Scene

Without a great fight scene for your action or fantasy or sci-fi novel, does it really fit the mold? The great fight scenes of old have transformed good books into great books: Harry Potter vs. Voldemort (Harry Potter and The Goblet of Fire), Paul Atreides vs. Jamis (Dune), etc. There are a lot of great battles to name from all sorts of books from a plethora of genres. But why are they so important?

Great battles can move stories forward, reveal character, and sometimes provide the reader with necessary exposition. Writing fight scenes requires a certain finesse and intentionality. Therefore, think of these five key tips when writing your fights.

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5 Tips for Self-Editing (by Kristin Noland)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information.

Today's post is written by Kristin Noland, a fellow editor with her own take on things. Kristin is a developmental and line editor, specializing in speculative fiction, specifically fantasy, paranormal romance, dystopian, and apocalyptic fiction.

So, take it away, Kristin, and let's share some wisdom!

5 Tips for Self-Editing (Guest Blog)

Before we get into how, let’s cover the why you should self-edit.

Competition

If you are going the self-publishing route, your novel will be competing with traditionally published ones that have been through multiple drafts and edits.

If you are planning on using traditional publishing routes, your work will be competing with submissions which have gone through multiple rounds of editing.

Your Readers

You want readers to get pulled into and enjoy the world you have created. To do that, you need to make sure you have a well-written, entertaining, and engaging novel that hits your readers' expectations.

You Become a Better Author

By self-editing, your writing skills will improve.

With the why explained, let’s get into the 5 steps of self-editing.

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The difference between romance and women’s fiction (Guest Blog from Carron Stevenson)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information.

Today's post by Carron Stevenson discusses the differences between romance and women's fiction. It's a subtle difference, but it's one that Carron has learnt through experience. And it really comes down to whether that romance thread is vital for the overall story or not.

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Writing using Dragon Dictation (Guest Blog)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information on to our readers.

Today's post about the positives and negatives of using Dragon Dictation comes from Ann Bell Feinstein.

Writing using Dragon Dictation

by Ann Bell Feinstein

A few months ago, I decided to invest in dictation software. A brief search led me, of course, to Dragon Dictation. After agonizing over the cost of the purchase, I finally added Dragon to my list of writing tools.

Whether it’s due to my accent or style of speaking, Dragon worked for me right out of the box. I did have a few issues that with audio settings; however, that was mostly due to the complicated audio set up I have on my computer.

I decided to share with you some things I’ve learned about using Dragon. And yes, I’m actually using Dragon to dictate this blog post.

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The Occupation Thesaurus (A Book Review by Ann Bell Feinstein)

Many writers are familiar with the mantra of Show, Don’t Tell. Exactly what it means is a subject that is up for debate, and not what this post is about. Nope. This post is looking at a brand new resource for writers designed to help writers show their stories.

Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi have just release The Occupation Thesaurusand one of our regular readers and friend to Black Wolf, Ann Bell Feinstein, decided to share with us her thoughts about the new book in the Thesaurus series.

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Realistic Character Occupations: U.S. Army Soldier, Patriot Launching Station Enhanced Operator Maintainer (14T)

To win readers over, we need to write characters so authentic they feel like real people. How do we do this? By brainstorming a character’s backstory, personality, needs, desires, and their day-to-day world. Lucky for us, one aspect of their daily life is a goldmine of characterization: the type of work they do.

Think about it: a job can reveal personality, skills, beliefs, fears, desires, and more, which is why Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi created The Occupation Thesaurus, a writing guide that profiles 124 possible careers and the story-worthy information that goes with each.

However, there was only so much space for only so many jobs.

Those of us at Black Wolf Editorial enjoy reading stories that have one of the elusive spies, assassins, or military personnel. On that note, we've coordinated efforts with one of our military connections to create this special entry to accompany The Occupation Thesaurus.

Staff Sergeant David Feinstein is a U.S. Army soldier with the unique role of being a Patriot Launching Station Enhanced Operator Maintainer (14T). That job title might be a little convoluted, but here, in a nutshell, are the key things that a writer needs to know.

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How to Write Realistic and Professional Scenes About Shooting (Guest Blog)

Writing takes a community, sharing ideas and supporting one another. So, when we get approached with an article that shares hard-earned knowledge, we couldn't be happier to pass that information on to our readers.

Today's post comes from Jay Chambers, who is a gun expert, and more than happy to help writers get it right when it comes to writing those gun scenes.

How to Write Realistic and Professional Scenes About Shooting

by Jay Chambers

Let’s face it, most writers are not gun experts. And gathering reliable data about how gun fights actually happen is difficult, because there are a lot of tall tales out there and combat data collection is spotty, but there are a few things that we know.

The behavior of gun-savvy people is easy to observe and replicate in your writing. Here’s what you need to know to write realistic shooting scenes that make you look like a professional who does their homework.

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Taking Weapons Overseas: Guest Blog Post

I'm always humbled when I'm approached by my creepy contacts with more information on how to characterized these special characters correctly. The knowledge they have... It's an eye-opener, that's for sure. Today's post isn't any different.

Ever wanted to know how to get weapons into some random country? Well, let someone who really is from the intelligence community give you a bit of insight.

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